I was sucked into her eyesAnd now I can see the truth.
That warm cozy dream of our future together
Was tranquil like the Dal lake in a spring
Though, the hell I created in the present was like
The world's end.
-Her will was much stronger than any wonder woman's -
And now slowly i watched how the hell i created
destroyed the tranquility of the Dal lake
we were enjoying in a boat,
snuggling and giggling
and i was playing with her fingers.
Just then mountains cracked open,
volcanoes erupted,
tsunamis came along with snowfall
and the massive hurricane which carried
trees, giant boulders, fire and snow.
Tranquil and heartwarming❤
ReplyDeleteGreat expression of emotion through words
ReplyDeleteHe caught our eyes...This poem is as beautiful as the poet😍
ReplyDeleteIt's like my life feelings
ReplyDeleteThe tranquillity present in your poem brings about a sense if calm to the readers
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully written 😍
ReplyDeleteBeautufull written....it's just woooow🤩
ReplyDelete🤩🤩👍
ReplyDeleteOllyyyy..... One step at a time and yes it's peaceful yet powerful. You've got the track.. Now just march foreward. This opening is huge.. You've so much inside you... Spit it out man
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